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Title: Steam is now giving away a unique zombie game away for free
Post by: Redaktion on March 14, 2025, 10:43:32
A unique zombie survival game with dark humor is free on Steam until March 18. Scheming Through The Zombie Apocalypse: The Beginning lets you outsmart others to survive instead of fighting the undead.

https://www.notebookcheck.net/Steam-is-now-giving-away-a-unique-zombie-game-away-for-free.979106.0.html
Title: Re: Steam is now giving away a unique zombie game away for free
Post by: Josh c on March 14, 2025, 12:07:11
The title is incorrect because it contains redundancy and a grammatical error. The phrase "giving away ... away" is redundant; the second "away" should be removed.

Additionally, "a unique zombie game away for free" is awkwardly structured. A better way to phrase it would be:

"Steam is now giving away a unique zombie game for free."

This revision eliminates redundancy while maintaining clarity.
Title: Re: Steam is now giving away a unique zombie game away for free
Post by: Anubhav Sharma on March 14, 2025, 14:11:05
Quote from: Josh c on March 14, 2025, 12:07:11The title is incorrect because it contains redundancy and a grammatical error. The phrase "giving away ... away" is redundant; the second "away" should be removed.

Additionally, "a unique zombie game away for free" is awkwardly structured. A better way to phrase it would be:

"Steam is now giving away a unique zombie game for free."

This revision eliminates redundancy while maintaining clarity.


My bad Josh, I've corrected the title. Thanks for bringing the error to my attention.